Query:
Dear Awesome Coaches,
When an alien
race known as the Adviera abducts thirteen-year-old Gary Jones, they give him
the power of telekinesis. Unfortunately this cool new ability comes with a
price. The aliens insist Gary complete dangerous retrieval missions for them,
alongside other Earth kids with abilities.
The Adviera believes Gary could be the key to saving their race and are secretly grooming him to lead their war effort. Too bad Gary just wants to complete his service to the aliens quickly, so he can use his power to exact revenge on the school bully. But if Gary fails them, it’s not just the Adviera who will suffer—the fate of humanity could also be at risk.
Although Gary works closely with his alien trainer, Esther, so he can learn to control his ability, he’s unprepared for the missions and simulated battles the Adviera force him into. If the alien council would stop changing their ridiculous demands, Gary might have a chance to perfect his ability before they thrust him into a situation he may not be able to survive.
The Adviera believes Gary could be the key to saving their race and are secretly grooming him to lead their war effort. Too bad Gary just wants to complete his service to the aliens quickly, so he can use his power to exact revenge on the school bully. But if Gary fails them, it’s not just the Adviera who will suffer—the fate of humanity could also be at risk.
Although Gary works closely with his alien trainer, Esther, so he can learn to control his ability, he’s unprepared for the missions and simulated battles the Adviera force him into. If the alien council would stop changing their ridiculous demands, Gary might have a chance to perfect his ability before they thrust him into a situation he may not be able to survive.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Jamie Krakover
First 250:
No matter how far Gary ventured from home, he couldn’t escape his mother’s radar. She had scolded him countless times because he went looking for trouble. Gary, however, thought it was the opposite—trouble always found him. Although, exactly how he might step into some kind of mess while walking the dog, he had no clue.
First 250:
No matter how far Gary ventured from home, he couldn’t escape his mother’s radar. She had scolded him countless times because he went looking for trouble. Gary, however, thought it was the opposite—trouble always found him. Although, exactly how he might step into some kind of mess while walking the dog, he had no clue.
Gary ran his
hand through his shaggy, brown hair and risked a glance back at the living room
window. His mother’s gaze pierced him just long enough to send a shudder
rippling through his spine before she turned from the window and disappeared. She looks like an angry gargoyle.
He grabbed for
his earbuds and shoved them into his ears. Bobbing his head to the thundering
drums and crashing guitars, he stepped in synch with the music. Buster, his
Golden Retriever, had other ideas and dragged Gary down the street as if on a
mission. The dog stopped at a dimly lit street lamp near the end of the block,
barked, and pulled hard on the leash. In an effort to hold him back, Gary
grabbed Buster’s collar with his free hand.
“What is it,
boy? What are you barking at?”
Gary looked
around the darkening street. Despite the parked cars, no one was outside.
Following Buster’s gaze, he found the cause of the disturbance—white lights
floating across the sky.
“It’s just a
plane. Come on.” He tried to yank the dog back toward the house. Buster planted
his butt on the ground and whined.
